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Monday, April 19, 2010

Lone Warrior-Chapter 2: Drowning in Disbelief:Continued, (Again and again and again and again)

"Martina!"
This time I yelled her name. Struggling to push her soaking brown hair out of her eyes, she swam over to me. "Why did you drag Taledo under?" Megan questioned suspiciously.
"I wasn't sure who she was, I thought the best way to find out would to be to see her under the water."
"You opened your eyes under the water?"
I shuddered, my eyes always stung really bad if I did that.
"It feels quite nice actually" Martina stated matter-a-factually.
Then a a blazing light's reflextion on the water covered us. I tried to cover my eyes, while not sinking into the sea. It was an arch, but an arch like I had never seen before. It was made of pure light, yet it looked a if someone had carved into it with a chisel, creating a series of words. I could not read the words, they looked as if they had jumped right off a Persian tapestry. Squinting, I looked beyond the arch, what I saw, could have given an even healthy young man a heart-attack. "L...o...ok, beh...in...d th...the arch" I stuttered. For the last word, my mouth could barley form the word, "Land."

TO BE CONTINUED...

1 comment:

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